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Crossing Realms

by Mark E. Boone

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97,438

Genre:
Fantasy

Sentence:
Redemption and retribution drive an earthbound angel to thwart Satan’s plot to usurp the earthly realm.

Blurb:
Now here’s a cast of characters: A disgruntled, former F.B.I agent turned cantankerous, scotch-swilling gumshoe, his deceased friend’s widow – a warrior monk, a Jewish boy – and the unlikeliest of pairings, an underworld demoness plagued with life-defining issues and a beleaguered, earthbound angel on the arduous path to heavenly redemption.

Bound as one, the misfits find themselves in a perilous struggle against nuances of good and evil to thwart Satan’s boldest, most ruthless plan yet to usurp the world of men in the 20th Century.

Synopsis:

In the beginning…

In lieu of the Second Battle for Heaven – as a defensive move to protect Earth - Archangel Michael crosses over into the fledgling world of men bearing a gift of heavenly magnitude; a box-like vessel with extraordinary powers. One man witnesses the crossing; a Mesopotamian sheepherder and believer named Dryhus. Terrified, Dryhus turns to run away but Michael beckons him to stay. The archangel calls upon Dryhus and his sons and grandsons to keep the Loculus safe from demons and men until a time far in the future when another of God’s messengers would claim the vessel and use it to save the world of men. Constructed of desert sand and celestial energy, the Loculus is given the ability to ensnare all magic, good or bad, within its modest bounds. Michael determined that without sorcery and black magic, Satan’s surreptitious plan to lay claim to the world of men was sure to fail.


In the autumn of 1968, a shroud of mysterious occurrences blankets the Washington D.C area.

Chapter 1 introduces two F.B.I. agents dispatched to a rural area outside of Alexandria, Virginia to investigate reports of Satanists practicing nightly sacrificial rituals in the woods. The agents’ intrusion into the dark, shadowy world of demonic synergy is the last time anyone hears from either one of them. The assistant director dispatches more agents - among them, Special Agent Jack Campbell - to go and check out the site of the dual disappearance. Agent Campbell arrives first on the scene. Jack Campbell - with an extensive background in theology, and close ties to a secret order of warrior monks in the Scottish Highlands, places a phone call before he leaves for Alexandria to his best friend, mentor and former partner, Milo Brodie. Brodie is a crack criminal-profiler - disgruntled with the bureau - turned cantankerous, Scotch-swilling private eye. Jack asks his old friend for help on another case involving the grisly slaying of a U.S. Senator. They decide to meet later at a local coffee shop to discuss the case. After inspecting the agent’s car on the side of the road, Jack makes the decision to go into the woods to find his peers, sensing they may be in danger. He discovers horrendous carnage, the bodies of the two agents and those of two children used in rituals kidnapped from a nearby farm. Farther on, he finds an old horse-driven carnival wagon hidden in the same area as the killings. The wagon wore the lettering ‘Leonard the Magnificent’ on the sides. Jack also finds an ancient book of apocryphal text in the wagon and while skimming through it by flashlight finds a stunning connection to his other case. Upon leaving the scene, a large flock of ravens attacks him. Battered and bloody, Jack barely makes it back to his car. On the way back home, Jack calls the assistant director and informs him of the murders but doesn’t tell him about the book he found. He decided to find out more about it before disclosing its existence to his superiors. Five blocks from his house, a demon attacks and kills Jack. The demon’s name was Leonard the Sorcerer, one of the original Fallen Ones, and Satan’s proxy on Earth. Leonard shreds the book and evidence file Jack had on him at the time.


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Milo Brodie wakes up in a fog with a spilt drink in his hand, remembering bits and pieces of a phone call from his friend Jack. He showers, dresses, has a drink for the road, grabs a newspaper, and then calls a taxi to take him to the coffee shop. Brodie reads about the senator’s murder and an eyewitness account of his murderer, a large man wearing a dark overcoat. In front of four witnesses, the tall man murders the senator with his bare hands, slashing open his body, disemboweling him. Both Brodie and the cab driver see a tall man in an overcoat acting strangely, lumbering down the street stopping cars and tossing pedestrians out of his way. Brodie watches him go into a jewelry store, orders the cabbie to stop, gets out and follows the man into the store. Once inside, he finds no trace of the perpetrator but finds the body of an old man he assumes is the shop owner. Absent a pulse or heartbeat, Brodie investigates the remainder of the store. In a storeroom, instead of stores and supplies he finds an extensive library and many antiques. Busy looking around, Brodie’s surprised by a voice behind him. He turns around to face a demon, one of Leonard’s cronies named Marbus. Marbus, a lower-order demon, knows he is no match for the firepower of Brodie’s .45, and after scaring the bejesus out of the frightened man, disappears into thin air. The demon starts a fire in the building next door before disappearing for good, leaving Brodie to search for potential victims. Tired, sooty and in dire need of a drink, Brodie sits down on a curb across the street from the fire. He pays no attention to the bustling firefighters and onlookers all around him; instead, he sits there entranced by the fire and sees an ominous face appear in the flames, it’s the demon. Brodie walks away tired confused and very much in need of a drink.


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Chapter 4 introduces Father Gavin Dalry, who belongs to the same secret order of warrior monks as Jack did, and Amidus, an angel of the original Heavenly Host, unjustly banished to Earth by Archangel Michael. While performing his duty to translate ancient scripture, the monk discovers text previously unknown, describing Satan’s plot to infiltrate the earthly realm with his hordes of demons. He also discovers knowledge of the Holy Vessel left on Earth by the Archangel, Michael. The only problem is; no one on Earth knows its whereabouts. To introduce the story of Amidus, I must first return to the past, far into the past, back to the year, 100 B.C.


(Note: I disbursed the following narrative throughout the book. I aggregated salient parts here for purposes of explanation. It is essential to the story.)

In the beginning… the real beginning

God created the angels. Of the very first order, Michael, Gabriel, Raphael, Satan, Ophaniel and Amidus spent eons at the foot of the Throne of God learning His Word and training for their appointed tasks to manage the Universe in His Name. Once training was finished, they were given grand status, Michael and Gabriel as Seraphim the highest order, the managers of Heaven, and Raphael, Satan, Ophaniel and Amidus as Cherubim the second highest order, the guardians of affairs of Earth and men, God’s newest creations. God bore many thousands of other angels to populate lower orders and serve both the Seraphim and Cherubim.

Satan became disgruntled with his work as guardian of men. He convinced lower order angels that God preferred the men to His first creations. He plans an uprising to usurp more power in Heaven but meets resistance in the awesome forms of Michael and Gabriel. The Battle for Heaven commences and Satan and the Fallen Ones were soundly defeated. Michael passes judgment on Satan and his followers, casting them into the Lake of Fire until the day of Final Judgment.

Before pronouncement of sentences, Satan tricks Amidus into staying silent about what he knows concerning the origin of the uprising thereby loosening Satan’s chains enough to where limited access to Earth is possible. In exchange for his silence, Satan promises Amidus he will abandon his scheme of crossing over into the earthly realm with his band of Fallen Ones to claim Earth as his prize. Meanwhile, in direct contradiction to his word, Satan sends one of his generals, Leonard the Sorcerer and a number of his legions to Earth to begin wreaking havoc, creating chaos to soften Earth's defenses against the dark realm, chaos set to culminate in the 20th Century. Michael summons Amidus to stand in judgment without advocate and banishes him to Earth, where he is to have no contact with men or angels. The angel grows bitter and for eons hardens his heart to prayer. He lives in a cave in the desert not a living soul in his vicinity. At the same time, Michael forms a number of Orders of Warrior Monks on Earth in hopes of thwarting any plots of dark insurgence into the earthly realm, but Satan sends Baphomet to Earth to thwart the monks, putting doubts in the minds of King Philip the Sixth of France and Pope Clement the Fifth in Rome.

Persecuted, hunted, imprisoned and killed by forces of darkness, Michael's dwindling army of monks, theologians and priests now exist as a single Order. This lone order of Earth's defenders spread around the world, some living in a small, clandestine group deep in the Scottish Highlands and a few others led normal lives across Europe and beyond. Some of the monks became involved in premier global intelligence and law enforcement agencies.

One of these latter-day, clandestine warriors, Jack Campbell discovers evidence of Satan's dark plans for Earth, in particular, a proposed crossing over into the earthly realm of one-third of the Fallen Ones in 1968; a turbulent year in which chaos and unrest is rampant on Earth. The agent manages to contact his brother, a fellow warrior in Scotland and informs him of his evidence of Satan's malevolent plans right before he's violently murdered. Jack also informs his wife, Claire, through evidence left at their house. Claire knew about her husband’s membership in the Order but he swore her to secrecy. Jack’s death and a series of other grisly murders prompt Claire - always the impetuous one - to enlist the aid of Milo Brodie. The pair opens an investigation of their own to thwart Satan’s plans, and seek retribution for Jack's murder.


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Enter Delipitore. (A demoness subjugated to the sorcerer) Interned beneath Leonard's Lair, the demoness awaits orders to participate in the crossing. In the meantime, the sorcerer uses her for menial tasks and his demeaning, twisted assignations. Summoned to Leonard's chambers one day, while traversing the network of subterranean tunnels beneath Leonard's dark lair, Delipitore becomes unwittingly embroiled in an overthrow of the sorcerer’s throne initiated by a pair of lower order demons named Marbus and Malphus. She escapes in the ensuing chaos only to find herself a stranger in a strange world, confused, lonely and unsure of her purpose for existence. Delipitore always harbored regrets for joining in Satan's fall from God's Grace but the path to redemption always escaped her. After her timely escape, she searches for clues to her destiny. Little did she know, her search paralleled that of another lost soul searching for his own destiny and redemption, the earthbound angel? Unable to ascend to Heaven because of obvious past misdeeds, Delipitore senses the aura of another angelic presence on Earth and seeks him out hoping to somehow redeem herself and find likened company. Meanwhile, Leonard survives the takeover attempt but inadvertently lets the dissenters escape. The sorcerer puts a bounty on the heads of the dissenters including Delipitore, and continues with his plans to disrupt Earth.


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Archangel Michael appears in visage to Amidus and offers him a chance for redemption but Amidus bitterly shuns him for wrongly banishing him from Heaven. By Order of God, Michael is to stay out of earthly affairs and remain in Heaven to protect it from dark influence. He is unable to find any angelic assistance on Earth and must rely on fate and his human warrior monks to thwart Satin's crossing.


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Father Thomas Campbell (Jack's brother) enlists another of his brethren, Father Gavin Dalry, who he finds out also discovered evidence of Satan's plot through hidden language in the ancient Holy Scriptures and the apocryphal, to accompany him to Washington D.C. The priests meet with Claire and Milo Brodie. The four unlikely participants combine forces and resources to battle Leonard's minions and Satan's nefarious plot. Meanwhile, through perseverance, Amidus is finally able to regain most of his celestial abilities by prayer, meditation and interpretation of coded hidden scripture. Amidus opens his heart, realizes his redemption in the Eyes of God is possible, and strives to find the path.


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By sheer chance, (or so they think) Amidus meets Delipitore and even though divided by past choices and deeds, the unlikely pair grow closer in spirit and become one in purpose. Together, they decide to expose and thwart Satan's plans, return the dark prince and his minions to the bowels of Hell, and redeem themselves in the Eyes of God, thereby regaining ascension. Through great deliberation and studying of the Scriptures, Delipitore and Amidus discover the only way to defeat Leonard's army is through the world of men. However, there is a steep price for their redemption and the freedom of humanity. They join forces with the Order, Claire and Milo Brodie to stave off Leonard's evil until they can locate the Loculus. However, a number of obstacles stand in their way. First, they must find the human - a Jewish boy - given the Loculus for safekeeping. Second, once they do, the plan is to figure out the formula to unlock the vessel. Third, once the loculus is unleashed - stripped of all powers - they must protect the earthlings while surviving the onslaught of evil until the purging of magic extends to the farthest corners of Earth.

 

Unfortunately, the collective, would-be savers of humanity encounter a setback none of them expected; the demon Marbus absconds with the holy vessel leaving them without a clue as to how they should proceed; and little hope of succeeding in their mission. To make things worse, Claire finds out she’s pregnant. With child, she discovers magical powers, which prompts Father Dalry’s memory. He puts it all together and discovers from obscure scripture that the Loculus will not save the Earth. The vessel is a diversion. The rest was vague. The baby is born. With the mission now infinitely more confusing, faith, resolve and sense of purpose all tested to the limit in every participant. Not all of them will survive the test. Meanwhile, Claire unexpectedly finds herself growing closer to Milo Brodie. The feelings are reciprocal but both resist temptation because of Milo’s lifelong friendship with Jack. However, through ministering, Amidus convinces them to follow their hearts.

 

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Two couples - one earth-born and one bore in Heaven - meet one more time on the cliffs overlooking the Sea of Hebrides in Scotland to reminisce about their harrowing adventure, celebrate their victory. They part for the very last time. Amidus and Delipitore together find peace in God’s keeping but left with a decision between ascension and staying on Earth as guardians. Milo and Claire learn to follow their destiny together, knowing in their hearts that it was what Jack would have wanted.

Biography
“Born in a log cabin in the dead of winter…” (Oops, this is real life! Ok, so it was a split-level, redwood ranch house in Western Pennsylvania with a big “B” on the chimney. And ‘twas springtime…)

Growing up in the blue-collar dynasty of the United States in the late sixties and seventies oftentimes left a lot to the imagination. No ambivalence at all – everything cut and dried, forty-hour workweek, vacation two weeks a year – but at least it left open vast room for growth. It did not take long before high aspirations and a bit o’ itchy ambition swept over me and at the ripe old age of eighteen, I set my sights on the golden state – making it my home for the next four years.

An avid reader and wannabe author, I spent my free time writing short stories, poetry and articles on current events, occasionally submitting to local and national periodicals and achieving modest success at best. Stints in the world of mass employment, including machine-tool-technician, horticulturist, swamper (on an oilrig), security guard and even bartending/bouncing took up most of my time, and I never acted on my highest aspiration of all, novelist, until well after my spontaneous, solo, six-month, cross-country adventure, and a lot of reflection.

Eventually, I settled in Florida, worked at Mickey’s World for a few years – writing mostly for an audience of one (myself) until I decided to further my penning skills – enrolling in creative writing courses in Central Florida while at the same time establishing a home-based business on the Sun Coast. Feeling secure, I now have the time to do what I always wanted to do…. (Write, write and write some more!)

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