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Raptor's Edge
by Mark E. Boone

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Length:
104,000 Words

Genre:
Fantasy/Adventure

Author's Representative:

Faye M. Swetky
The Swetky Agency
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St. George, Utah 84770

435-656-0426
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Other Books in Series:
Trilogy in Progress

The Book in One Sentence:
An apocalyptic war unfolds between powerful wizards; at stake: control of the Earth's fledgling world of men...and immortality, itself!


Blurb/Logline:
An untamed precipice – suitable only for birds of prey – becomes the unlikely means for human redemption as rebellious, unsavory elements of The Sorcerer’s Council of Mongstrom devises a far-reaching conspiracy for domination and immortality in hopes of thwarting prophecy on Earth.

After evoking the heinous wrath of a crotchety old sorcerer, the Fledgling World of Men are faced with a calamitous future of enslavement and worse unless they can find the one person who heard the pronouncement of the curse, the one who knows how to remove it.


Left with a burgeoning mystery, very few clues, and little hope for the future, a hearty but reluctant band of four adventurers sets out into the unknown, searching desperately and facing daunting challenges and constant peril along the road to the nether region.  Little did they know, their quest was only the beginning….

Synopsis:
 A curse… The future of mankind is threatened when a crotchety old sorcerer with unrealized aspirations of power and immortality goes on a heinous rampage, declaring war on an unwitting valley in the world of men.

During one of his many tirades of terror, the sorcerer steals a local girl from her father’s home, holding her captive and compelling her to be his wife. By sheer happenstance, perhaps fatefully so, the girl is unknowingly part of a triumvirate of emissaries sent to Earth to investigate the egregious abuse of power by the hand of the very wizard holding her prisoner.  Fortunately, she is able to use her hidden powers to withdraw into a magical realm of refuge to repel his repeated advances while gaining knowledge into the wizard’s dark motives.  Undaunted, the sorcerer bides his time, weakening the girl’s resolve a little more each day, unaware of the girl’s true calling.

Having lost his wife a few years ago, the girl’s father, devastated by his latest loss, boldly sets out to find the wizard’s abode and rescue her.  Empowered by destitute loneliness and a magnificent new sword forged by a master of metallurgy, the despondent but determined emissary trudges through Micel-Holt (The Great Forest) to confront the sorcerer and rescue his precious daughter.  He encounters fierce beasts loyal to the wizard, barely escaping with his life.  He sneaks into the house, and a hard-fought battle ensues as the wizard bombards the desperate man with magical hindrances and dark foes. Through trickery, distraction and extremely good fortune (with the aid of his daughter), the old sorcerer finally succumbs to the father’s retribution but still manages to cast a malediction upon the fair valley before he dies.  The girl discovers, through the dead wizard’s scrolls and writings, his nefarious plans and learns of a way to break the curse.


The father, gravely injured by the wizard, dies on the way back to Grene-Mara while in the middle of writing a testament about the information needed in order to break the dreadful curse.  The girl hastily buries her father, and for reasons unknown even to her, mysteriously disappears; leaving the unwitting valley to discover the curse’s calamitous implications through time alone.  The citizens slowly begin to notice the curse’s effect on the valley, (the growing season diminishes by one day per year) and are forced to deal with their new dilemma.

Fortunately, a group of schoolchildren and their chaperone discover the hastily dug unmarked grave and the tattered, half-written testament started by the dying man.  They also find an urn containing the charred remains of the evil sorcerer.  References within the scroll to the girl’s powers compel the town council to employ the services of the local constable to deal with the problem.  The peace officer convinces three of his friends, great adventurers all, and the town’s best bet for survival, to deliver them from impending doom.  They set out to locate the girl, who by now is a grown woman.


They decide to make a pact between them to deliver the community from the stranglehold inflicted by the evil necromancer...or die trying.  Along the way, they encounter fierce beasts, vile trolls, and a series of unearthly terrors (including a wicked dragon) unleashed by the nephew of the demised sorcerer with similar aspirations of grandeur, not to mention the reputed power of immortality!


Through great courage and just a bit of luck, the men find the girl and probe her for information until she finally remembers what she had cryptically blocked from her mind years ago.  Through her knowledge of the wizard and her timely recruitment of the evil sorcerer’s good hearted brother to aid them, the valiant group is able to sever the curse by dispersing the evil wizard’s remains amidst the astral air currents from the infamous Raptors Edge, thereby cleansing the evil and ridding the valley of its stranglehold.  The victorious band returns home, minus one brave soul who sacrificed his life for the betterment of the quest, to grateful friends and family and a period of relative peace in the valley, while the nefarious one licks his wounds and plots his vengeance against the valley and their benefactor…his own brother.

 

Author's Bio:

“Born in a log cabin in the dead of winter…”  (Oops, this is real life!  Ok, so it was a split-level, redwood ranch house in Western Pennsylvania with a big “B” on the chimney.  And ‘twas springtime…)

Growing up in the blue-collar dynasty of the United States in the late sixties and seventies oftentimes left a lot to the imagination.  No ambivalence at all – everything cut and dried, forty-hour workweek, vacation two weeks a year – but at least it left open vast room for growth.  It did not take long before high aspirations and a bit o’ itchy ambition swept over me and at the ripe old age of eighteen, I set my sights on the golden state – making it my home for the next four years. 


An avid reader and wannabe author, I spent my free time writing short stories, poetry and articles on current events, occasionally submitting to local and national periodicals and achieving modest success at best.  Stints in the world of mass employment, including machine-tool-technician, horticulturist, swamper (on an oilrig), security guard and even bartending/bouncing took up most of my time, and I never acted on my highest aspiration of all, novelist, until well after my spontaneous, solo, six-month, cross-country adventure, and a lot of reflection.


Eventually, I settled in Florida, worked at Mickey’s World for a few years – writing mostly for an audience of one (myself) until I decided to further my penning skills – enrolling in creative writing courses in Central Florida while at the same time establishing a home-based business on the Sun Coast.  Feeling secure, I now have the time to do what I always wanted to do….  (Write, write and write some more!)

Explain How This Book Lends Itself to Movie and/or Television Rights' Sales:
I believe this novel will have far-reaching appeal to "Sword and Sorcery" zealots of all ages.

Author's Qualifications for Writing This Book:
I'm an avid action/adventure reader, researcher, trivia master, and writer.
 

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