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Submission Synopsis
Danse
Macabre
by H. D. Gausch
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Length: 51,000
Genre: Gothic Romance
Sentence: Will this young dancer yield her love, her art, and possibly
her life to possess a man who is already possessed?
Blurb/Logline: To an isolated island off the cold
waters of northern Maine comes a young ballet dancer to claim a promised legacy
of training from the famed but mysterious former partner and paramour of her
deceased mother. But there is more than dance to learn in the purificaiton
of her art. Will this young ballerina yield her love, her art, and possibly
even her
life to possess a man who is already possessed?
Synopsis: On the dark wharf, a curt note from
Maestro denies her an audience. On threat of calling the police, the enigmatic
housekeeper takes her to the island where she discovers an extraordinary dancer,
Maestro's son, to whom she is immediately drawn. On seeing them dance, Maestro
agrees to train her, insulting her and cruelly driving her to perform the
difficult Danse Macabre. She receives an offer to star in a Danish
company, but the collapse of the cliff stairs traps her. She is caught by
conflicting desires for both father and son. Driven to know the dark secret in
Maestro's tower rooms, she climbs over a rain-soaked roof and finds Maestro is
only a shriveled corpse. In a delusion to deny his father's death, the son has
assumed his persona and trained her. In a trance, she is called to the roof edge
to join Maestro in a death plunge. When she nearly falls, the son snaps his
delusion and saves her.
Opening:
The sea rolled gray and forbidding like a mass of cold molten iron as it met the
hard blue steel of the evening sky. On the dim horizon squatted the island, as
dark and mysterious as its owner, the famous danseur noble, Gregory
Lichine.
Karin caught her breath. It was there, it was real, he was real. She'd
dreamed about coming here ever since she began the first tiny steps of ballet
that her deceased mother had taught her. The plan was for him to take her
training to the next level, to continue the legend of the ballet world's two
most celebrated dancers. This was the day she'd been training for during the
past eighteen years. Now the years of work, sweat and pain were all for nothing.
The dream had come to an abrupt end. Her mother was gone, and now so was Karin's
hope.
She looked out again at the fading outline of the island called Gullhaven, a
distant vision that suddenly was unattainable. Karin turned away from the
dirty window of the marina shack, her anger rising. She watched the bearded
boatman wipe the greasy counter with a wet gray rag.
No one was there to meet her or arrange for her to cross the water. Not that
she'd needed anyone to put out a welcome mat. She was here to collect a legacy.
Capable of being on her own at nineteen, she had sent a note earlier declaring
her desire to claim the promised training that was her legacy. What she hadn't
expected was the curt reply, typewritten and unsigned, waiting for her on the
shore, destroying her dream.
Gregory Lichine in Europe for indefinite stay. Arrangements have been made
for you to study with Mikhail Lermontov in New York City. This will meet his
obligation to your mother Olga Tchernikova.
And sending her to Mikhail Lermonov! Her mother would be furious. The man was in
no way Lichine's equal; a creator of fragile, effeminate dancers without passion
or technique. The legend of would die.
Lichine and Tchernikova! The names were still illustrious in the ballet world.
The brief note suggested none of the passion and intensity Karin had come to
believe embodied Gregory Lichine. Karin reread the message ─ so curt, so cold.
It was without the grace and elegance her mother had narrated when she spoke
lovingly of him. The way her mother described him, Karin knew, as did the
entire dance world, that they were lovers as well as partners.
"He is magic, my little one - brilliant, talented and arrogant. He's proud,
stern and completely amoral . . . but we shared a magical experience together
that I will never forget. One day when you are ready to go to him, you will
experience it, too."
Karin knew her mother had loved him . . . even feared him. It had come as a
surprise to everyone in the dance world when the famous ballerina assoluta
had married a young emerging symphony conductor, Per Nordlund, Karin's
father, and not the imperious Gregory Lichine. The tabloids had a field
day guessing the reason for the ending of a superb artistic and intimate
relationship.
Still, the promise had been made by Linchine when Karin was born, to train
Olga's daughter in the Maryinski style of Russian ballet as soon as she had
completed solid classical training. Over the years, Karin developed so far as to
be accepted into a regional ballet company's corps de ballet with
occasional opportunities as a soloist. She was noticed as a dancer of talent,
but was rarely available for the necessary touring, as her mother always held
her back for more intense training. It was an obsession that kept Karin
relegated to local performances.
"Maestro Lichine must find no flaws, Karen. I won't send you to him until you
are ready." Unfortunately, Olga Tchernikova died before Karin had achieved a
level her mother thought was acceptable.
It was well-known that as both a teacher and a dancer, Lichine had no equal.
Karin had dreamed of the day when she could display all the years of work for
her mother's paramour. Now she was here and felt ready for him. Why had he
changed his mind when she appeared today to claim the legacy? He must know of
Olga's passing, which was reported world wide.
Had Karin studied sixteen years for this rebuff? From the first painstakingly
supervised demi-plie to the thirty-two rigorous fouettes of Don
Quixote, her mother had reminded her of the promised training.
She would shout, "With authority! With ballon! Gregory would never permit
such lifeless jetes! For him, dance for him! Make me proud to present
you to him."
Then a year ago, after her mother's death, those letters, those beautiful
letters she'd saved, had all come into Karin's hands.
Olga, my beloved. Our souls are forever entwined. You cannot remove yourself
from me, nor can I ever be free of you. You will come to know that marriage
kills the love it seeks to celebrate, and that such a ritual bond can only
strangle the free artistic spirit. You waste precious time from me. Yet I know
that eventually you will come and we can be rejoined in our art ─ and our mutual
passion.
But Olga hadn't gone to him. Whether she'd ever meant to, Karin couldn't know.
Apparently her mother was faithful to the gentle, affectionate man she'd
married, a man extensively schooled in music, famous in his own right and awed
by his wife's fame and talent. He was completely devoted to her. But in the
inconsolable grief of her passing, he died three months later. Now both were
gone and Karin was alone. But there was still the legacy to claim.
What had Olga Nordlund written to Gregory Lichine these past years to keep that
love alive, to keep his letters coming? Had she promised to come herself to
present her daughter ─ and perhaps renew their love affair?
Lichine's latest letter, dated over two years ago:
Is it through Karin that we shall find each other again? So be it. Send her
if she has the talent you report. My gift to you shall be her art. Shall I teach
her to love, as well, if you do not come with her? Certainly you have memories
of the all consuming fires of love we shared.
Olga died in her studio, alone. She had been working on a masterpiece, a work
for Gregory Lichine. Although she seemed driven to complete it, to have her
daughter perform it for him, Karin had never seen it fully executed, had only
danced parts of it and reviewed her mother's notes after her death. It was a
difficult, but inventive gift for her former lover, an extraordinary dance
sequence set to music by Saint Saens: Dance Macabre.
Prizes: Two short Story Honorable Mentions.
Bio: The author has a Master's Degree in Clinical
Psychology. In her younger years, she was a member of the Pennsylvania Civic
Ballet and a teacher at the Connecticut Civic Ballet, founded the Ballet
Workshop, a small dance company, and is an artist with several one-man shows.
She was a Woman Officer in the US Marine Corps Reserve. Her son is a musician,
and her daughter is in charge of Harvard's three art museums. |