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Circle of Wholes
by Sean Warner
a.k.a. Soren Nielsen
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Length:
77,700 Words
Genre:
Contemporary Romance

Author Soren Nielsen
writing as Sean Warner
Other Books in Series:
N/A
Sentence:
When miracles happen
in a small Maine town, a businesswoman discovers that her surprising love
affair and her newspaper’s responsibility are on a dramatic collision
course.
Blurb/Logline:
Amanda McGee faces two challenges in life. First, she must
reconcile how a stranger got invited to her dinner table and then into her
heart. At the same time, the family's small-town newspaper must
decide how to report on a third miracle cure at the local hospital.
Love and miracles? They happen every day. Just ask Amanda.
Synopsis:
Amanda McGee lives alone but she is not looking nor is she lonely. Her
gift shop on well-traveled U.S. 1 along the coast of Maine, plus the
family business managed by her son Jed, are distractions from being a
divorced woman in her 50s. She is on the masthead of that business, the
weekly Narraguagus Pilot community newspaper, as its president and
publisher. The family name has been respected for decades.
A man traveling alone in a motor home stops at Amanda’s shop. In the
morning, he promises to return. To Amanda’s distress, she realizes after
they part that she doesn’t know the name of the widower who had spent the
night in her king-sized bed. Over the next few days, Amanda recalls the
hours she spent with the 50-something stranger – the dinner, the
conversations, the dancing by the fireplace, the lovemaking – and we learn
through the chapters that this is not an ordinary man, that the meeting is
not a coincidence. And, in the days ahead, Amanda becomes aware that an
arthritic hip joint is no longer causing her pain.
At the same time, Pilot reporter Erin Blanchet discovers that the local
hospital has experienced a mysterious healing, the third miracle cure in
about a year. An accident victim deemed near death awakes from his coma
and asks for a Diet Pepsi on the rocks. The Pilot news story brings
national media attention. As Erin continues to dig, trying through sources
and investigation to discover the cause of the miracles, the leads point
to a blood donor with the same type as the three miracle patients and to a
group called the Circle of Wholes, which conducted meetings with a guest
discussion leader named B.C. Nelson near the time of each miracle.
The Pilot’s staffers begin to examine their responsibilities in reporting
“facts” about miracles and faith and religion, introducing the conflict
that will come to a head later in the novel.
As promised, the man returns. His name is Benjamin. Their passion and
emotion is more powerful than their first night. Amanda is reluctant to
tell Ben that she loves him, but he surprises her in the morning by
speaking the words she wanted to say. Amanda finds out more details about
Ben and his life, but in musing about how to share the news of him with
her family she realizes that her version of Ben’s resume would be
inadequate for her son’s tough-reporter questions.
Erin’s digging involves one of her city sources, Paul Natale, who helps
her with some computer software advice. Normally abrasive, Natale changes
demeanor and Erin responds to his candor and his interest in developing a
fresh-start type of relationship with her. As compensation for his help,
Erin agrees to a long-standing invitation to go out. She combines the
dinner date with an interview of the couple sponsoring the Circle of
Wholes meetings, where it is confirmed that the group’s purpose is to
present justification about spiritual healing and that Nelson, the
discussion leader, is coming back to Maine. Natale pleads with Erin for
the opportunity to attend a meeting. He shocks Erin with the announcement
that he has prostate cancer. A life-altering operation is scheduled a few
days hence. He seeks more options, more hope.
When Amanda gets involved with the Pilot investigation and she sees the
facts assembled by the staff, she realizes the man they’re looking for is
Ben. She fears what the revelation in the newspaper might mean to her
reputation, and that of the Pilot. Her father had always preached full
disclosure, to ensure the public’s trust. Jed would be obligated to
acknowledge the intimate relationship in print. When Ben returns to
Amanda’s house from a meeting in Rhode Island, he proposes marriage before
their planned discussion – for which Amanda believes she already has the
critical answers to all her questions.
Nevertheless, she accepts Ben’s proposal. Jed arrives at the house,
interrupting an intimate scene in Ben’s motor home. When Jed is introduced
to Ben, he is faced with two shocking revelations: His mother is engaged
to someone he’s never met; and it is the man sought by the Pilot. His
initial delight turns to suspicion, and he accuses Ben of trying to quash
the story or to plant one with Amanda’s help.
Later, in Amanda’s den by the fireplace, Ben explains his role and
motivation for being involved with the Circle of Wholes, the purpose of
the group being enlightenment about the innate spiritual powers possessed
by every human. Ben also airs his concern about the newspaper’s plan to
publish the facts collected about the case. While the facts may be
accurate, the story does not provide the readers an answer. Yes, Ben was a
blood donor. But, he proclaims, he doesn’t know why transfusions of his
blood might have effected miraculous healing. The medical establishment
would scorn the story. Their lives would be a media circus, he predicts.
Amanda is determined to find a compromise between Ben’s drastic prognosis
and the newspaper’s responsibility. And, she assures Ben, “we could always
hit the road.” The next morning, Amanda informs Jed that the Pilot shall
not publish a hard-news story unless Erin can prove a direct link between
Ben’s donations and the patient’s transfusions. Ben agrees to a cell-phone
interview with Erin while he and Amanda drive to eastern Maine to announce
at his daughter’s home the engagement. On behalf of Erin, Jed asks if Ben
will have time to conduct a Circle of Wholes meeting. Ben declines, citing
his need to be in Delaware in a few days. Amanda decides to go with him.
In a fast-paced conclusion, Erin and Natale plan to intercept Ben on the
way back through Narraguagus, a desperate plot based on what she has found
out about B.C. Nelson, his motor home and his itinerary. Aided by a friend
who can track cell-phone signals, Erin and Natale are frustrated by
conflicting reports from the spotter. The confusion is caused by Ben being
in Amanda’s car, not the motor home, and by their turning off the main
road while Erin and Natale pass by. Ben and Amanda pick up his motor home
and head out of state. Using deduction and the location-finder, Erin and
Natale eventually catch up to the RV at a gas station. Erin pleads with
Ben to share with Natale – riding in the motor home while Amanda drives
the RV and she follows them on the interstate in Natale’s car – the Circle
of Wholes presentation, so that Natale might make a better decision about
whether he should undergo drastic surgery the next day. The plea implies
that Erin and Natale wish to share a normal life together. Ben agrees;
and, 90 miles later, Natale decides to postpone the surgery.
Jed proposes a new direction for the Pilot, acknowledging the inability of
facts to explain the process of faith and miracles. With some help, Jed
writes in the draft of an editorial, the newspaper will enlighten its
readers on a ‘Page of Miracles.’ And, Jed discloses the pending marriage
of his mother to Benjamin C. Nelson, the first contributor of an article
for the page.
In Delaware, Amanda and Ben decide they can help Jed and the Pilot, and
overcome whatever consequences they might face. In the night, lying close
to each other, Amanda is aware of Ben’s hand on her hip. The warmth evokes
a vague memory of their first night, his fingertips tucked inside the
elastic of her panties, the heat of his palm.
“Ben," she says, muffled by the pillow. “You cured my hip.”
"Umhhh, no. I just prayed for you.”
“But that healed it. Without my having to think about it. You are a
healer.”
“We all
are. If we want to be.”
Bio:
Soren
Nielsen, writing as Sean Warner, spent three decades in newspaper jobs –
from low-paid reporter to high-stress management – and early in his
four-state career discovered the therapeutic value of fiction writing.
After being mentored in the 1980s by
a professional, whose credits included scripts for a prime-time television
show, Warner enjoyed some attention from two agents and a Broadway
producer. An award-winning screenplay was pitched to the major TV
networks, but his big breakthrough was elusive and he accepted two more
journalism gigs before deciding that a full-time effort was needed to
write and to market his work. Since giving away all his neckties and
unstrapping his wristwatch in August 2001, Warner has completed a novel (Circle
of Wholes) and a feature-length screenplay (John Again). He has
also updated and revised an earlier novel (Yours, Forever), and he
is more than halfway finished with a new novel.
Earlier manuscripts scheduled to be
dusted off, reviewed, and revised include four screenplays (Dove Creek,
Yours, Forever, Fourth Quarter, and True Soldier) and two
novels (Hotel Texas and Fort Mackenzie).
Warner’s metamorphosis from suits to
shorts included some major down-sizing – from a three-bedroom house
to a 33-foot RV motor home, from two closets to 15 hangers, from shoe tree
to two pairs of Minnetonka loafers, from three walls of books to one
cupboard shelf, and from an over-crowded computer desk to carry-along
laptop. The RV’s navigator has been married to Warner for 39 years
and continues to provide him inspiration for adaptability, perseverance,
and love scenes.
Over cocktail chatter, Warner might
be goaded into admitting his fondness for a few of life's necessities.
Football. Beachcombing. Fiction writing. Grilled salmon filets. Sunsets at
Cape May Point. Tanqueray and tonics on the rocks, stirred. Hammocks.
Newspapers with two crossword puzzles. Jeopardy. Actresses named
Hepburn. Celine Dion or Shania Twain. Mark Twain or Elmer Kelton. New-age
gurus Dyer, Chopra and Wilde.
Endorsements:
Since Dr. Chopra, Dr. Dyer, and Wilde are mentioned in the book’s
acknowledgments, they might be interested in reading a first proof from
the publisher or from my literary agent.
Film:
Well. The book has a good, fast-moving plot and is written
in a scene-specific style.
Additional:
Personal experiences with cancer conquest and three decades in the
newsroom provide the theme and the realism of this novel. As a
convert to the philosophies offered by Dr. Deepak Chopra, Dr. Wayne W.
Dyer, and Stuart Wilde, I am not surprised when I read recently in the
Charlotte Observer that a man who had been given only days to live
walked out of the hospital cancer-free. One of the most prominent
newspapers in this country headlined the cure as a miracle. |